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Kim Gavlas

Eyes I dare not meet in dreams
Eyes I dare not meet in dreams by @kgavlas (Kim Gavlas)

Azel, the tall, stunningly endowed Irken, wearing a rather baroque costume. Did I mention the dress is evil?

Also including a verse of not-goth-poetry, by the modernist Eliot, because... umm... it seemed like a good idea at the time. And I love Eliot's poetry.

I stink at writing poetry.

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Posted: Thursday, 22 November, 2001 @ 10:21 PM

That. Is. Amazing. I salute you! (And immediately after saluting you, I faint dead away.) ::faint.:: EEEE. I am a squealy idiot.

Posted: Wednesday, 03 April, 2002 @ 02:49 AM

(waggles antenea in salute)

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