I think this is great, I love how you've drawn it in your own style, but what cracked me up was 'Phil Collins Hill' man, that is just hillarious!
South Park fancomic 2 by @jesshaye (Jessica Hayes)
Page two of "Congratulations, You've Been Abducted!"
Pooey
Dunno if you intended eet, but their basic expression looks like the shocked n' amazed anime face. ^~
Cartman's "footprints" in the snow were a nice touch. XD