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Biyun and Hoki
Biyun and Hoki by @porifra (pori fra)

This is one of the only two pics I have of them colored. they're very good friends(at least in my manga they are--) Biyun is quite headstrong, and I'm afraid 'Hoki'-as his nickname(he doesn't have a real name) has to follow along every time grumbling about it. brownhead is Biyun and the white-I've added to much shades there- and black is Hoki. I really like Biyun, but I absolutely HATE the way I did Hoki's arms!! I suck at sitting positions viewed from the front and this seems the worst of them. the result: Hoki seems to have short arms and quite a lack of lower body--;; This is their younger version of them, however, and maybe I can blame it on that? and Biyun's a fox, and the yellow thingie on the back is her tail, not 'yellow brick road' as my sister thought it was.

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Posted: Monday, 01 November, 2004 @ 01:14 PM

Lovely work, as always. I'm amazed at people that can draw more than one character at a time! That's something I have no skill at, sadly enough. I really love your coloring, the shading you use is very original and beautiful. The eyes are my favorite part, as always, they just jump out! Great job.

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