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Goldberry Took

Peace!
Peace! by @ChaosTheory (Goldberry Took)

WIP; am currently coloring. A line-art from waaaay back in July, which aside from porportion problems, I am rather fond of. Will post colored vers. as soon as I am done.

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Posted: Friday, 27 February, 2004 @ 05:52 PM

Oooh! Hannah! Ashamed of you, how come I havn't seen this one!?! Cute pic! Yay! Hmmm... Proportion problems? Don't really see any of hand. The only thing that looks just a bit strange is the hand behind the back...don't know exactly why though. Heh. ^^' (c: Very cute anyways, love her expression and antenie (sp?)!

Posted: Saturday, 28 February, 2004 @ 01:38 AM

^.^ Besides the arm behind the back, she is rather anorexic-looking, her legs are too long and thin at the top, her chest is twisted up waaaay too much and ... darn. I used to like this picture.

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