I must say I really like the style! It is almost stippled in effect. (And ya got the fish anatomy right! yaay!) The surrealism is cool, too...does that structure have an amost M.C. Escher look to it or is it just me? :) I agree with Athena that the structure's color could be changed because of the blending factor...but then again, it could have been your evil, evil scanner playing mean tricks, because in the thumbnail it looks just fine to me. :)
The Flying GoldFish by @Kamiyachan (Sandra Belanger)
I drew that GoldFish for my exam... and got 100%!! I was very proud! I like it very much 'cause it's realistic looking! ^_^ I took 7 different colors only for the fish!!
EEEE! Excellent!! 8D Great coloring, great details...Everything! Plus, it's AB! STRACT!
You could make that structure in the background darker (so it doesn't blend in with the fish so much...thusly, the fish'll "pop out" more), but I really do like it the way it is. :D Ausgetzeichnet!
my art: www.side7.com/art/daniwill