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Yaminah Tashanazi

Rath
Rath by @chaosmage (Yaminah Tashanazi)

Yet, another Dragon Knight . . . This is Rath, the DK of Fire. He seems to be fairly relaxed and maybe slightly cocky . . . I think I could've done a little better on the eyes though . . .

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Posted: Thursday, 23 October, 2003 @ 12:52 AM

Nice job! I like the pose. He does look relaxed. I also like how you shaded in his shirt to show the folds. =) For improvements, you might want to try shading in the future. Shading improves a pic by a lot. ^^ Also, his hand looks a little skewed. If you put your hand in that position, the index finger is shorter. Nice job all around though! ^_^

Posted: Thursday, 23 October, 2003 @ 08:40 PM

Dang, girl, he's CUTE!!! ^^ Luv your art style. 'Tis awesome how you can do the B&W stuff. I'm in awe of it, LOL. I can't do shading at all!

Posted: Sunday, 22 February, 2004 @ 05:13 PM

I like his pose a lot. He is very cute ! Moreover, I love the way you do his eyes and the colors of the picture

Posted: Tuesday, 24 February, 2004 @ 06:24 PM

hehe I also like the pose verry nice job they look really good even though I don't know the character

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