.< oh one more thing. since it's all nice and ended, I think that the bottom should just continue to the very edge of the white page.
Desert Fox by @takemeaway (Dash-iu Echidna)
It's my character, Desert "TwinT" Prower! This image is also up for auction at furbid.
Yay!
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20y59d ago
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Posted: Tuesday, 02 November, 2004 @ 06:37 AM
Oh wow!!!
Thank you so much! That's the best critique I've got ever O_O. I will try the coloured pencil blending thing.. it seems like it would help a lot! ^_^
And yea, I think I should work on my inking, expecially the hair a bit more, or maybe minimise the places I ink and put more detail around the colouring for the lines.
Thanks so much! hugs
I think this is one of your best drawings, the shading is really great and well done.
The one thing I want to offer a suggestion of, is that you can use other colours to shade, like in the orange maybe use a smidgen of yellow to blend into the highlights or browns to shade darker, it will give it a more natural feel to it. And one more thing, watch the thick lines giong into the hightlights of the hair. I think they need thinned out while they go into the highlights to make it look a little more natural.
I hope I helped. >.<