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He's got my leg!!
He's got my leg!! by @Dalamar (Blue Deyeu)

Heh heh, well, I found this fanfic on a site, where dear Hiei-sama was in heat, and, well, Kurama is not sure exactly how to respond. Yes, that is Kurama, his hair got cut in a nasty incident involving Karasu, Duo Maxwell, and a pair of scissors, strategically placed.

Okay, there's a link to this story at the bottom; if you are the author, I tried to e-mail you, but it failed. u.u Shame on me. I just loved that story so much; it's very funny. Mwaha.

http://www.yaoishrine.com/fictions/koorimes.htm

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Teen (O)
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Finished Work
Submitted:
20y218d ago
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Posted: Monday, 20 September, 2004 @ 01:17 PM

Nice ^^ I love their shadows on the ground. It makes it look more real.

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