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Gina Starwell

Cloud N Aeris
Cloud N Aeris by @Shelpup (Gina Starwell)

Just a cute lil pic of Cloud and Aeris. I was in the mood for some FFVII fanart. Colored in Photoshop.

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Posted: Thursday, 27 May, 2004 @ 01:59 AM

Cute picture. The expressions are very believable, the pose is cute, I really like Cloud's eyes, and you rendered the characters well (though Cloud's hair is a little spikier in the game, but it's all unrealistic anyway). Next time, try outlining your picture in pen or use a smoother brush around the edges of each area in Photoshop so that it doesn't look so blocky. Also, work on anatomy a little. Cloud's neck is too long and the arms are off - Aeris's wrists are too skinny and from this angle, Cloud's left shoulder muscle would be in front of the bicep.

Very nice otherwise, though. I like the happiness in this picture without it being overly sweet. The backdrop works nicely with it, as well.

Posted: Thursday, 27 May, 2004 @ 10:53 PM
THank you for the comment : -D-yeah i didn't ink them on purpose...kinda wanted to see how the scruffier lines worked out. I'll keep your tips in mind, thx again
Posted: Thursday, 27 May, 2004 @ 01:23 PM

Awe!! This pic is really nice. =3 I really like how you drew Aeris though... and I like her facial expression. She's of the happiness. _

Posted: Thursday, 27 May, 2004 @ 10:55 PM

Thank you! Yeah , i've always admired Aeris's upbeat personality; she's one of my fav. FF characters

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