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Peophin Mother & Child
Peophin Mother & Child by @coolgirl568 (Laura)

Yayness! A picture of a mother Peophin with her baby. Awww ^^; I think it turned out well–I fooled around with lighting effects in Photoshop to get that underwater effect :D

Also, a note–THAT URL AT THE BOTTOM IS NOT SOMEONE ELSE'S GALLERY. It is ME! I had another gallery at deviantART, but I hate that site, so a lot of my images still have that URL on it. It is my work. Got it? ^^;

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Posted: Friday, 24 October, 2003 @ 02:37 PM

Cute, and nice composition. Few notes though. One is the spotted ones nearest leg to the viewer should have some muscle visable on the body. It should go in front of the chest, not behind. Also, the pic could be greatly improved with some shading and lighting. Just follow the curves of the body with light above, and dark below and you should do fine. Still like I said, it's cute and well composed. :) Nice work.

Posted: Friday, 24 October, 2003 @ 06:46 PM

Thankies! ^^ Great comments... Yesh, I desperately need to take a class in anatomy. And shading. Mmm... shading. is reminded of having to learn about drapes in art class, the source of all evil in this world GAK! DRAPES! DOWN WITH DRAPES!! x_X

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