@Narcotics
JC Robinson

On My Own
On My Own by @Narcotics (JC Robinson)

And now I'm all alone again Nowhere to turn, no one to go to Without a home without a friend Without a face to say hello to And now the night is near I can make believe he's here

Sometimes I walk alone at night When everybody else is sleeping I think of him and I'm happy With the company I'm keeping The city goes to bed And I can live inside my head

On my own Pretending he's beside me All alone I walk with him till morning Without him I feel his arms around me And when I lose my way I close my eyes And he has found me

In the rain the pavement shines like silver All the lights are misty in the river In the darkness, the trees are full of starlight And all I see is him and me forever and forever

And I know it's only in my mind That I'm talking to myself and not to him And although I know that he is blind Still I say, there's a way for us

I love him But when the night is over He is gone The river's just a river Without him The world around me changes The trees are bare and everywhere The streets are full of strangers

I love him But every day I'm learning All my life I've only been pretending

Without me His world would go on turning A world that's full of happiness That I have never known

I love him I love him I love him But only on my own.

Artwork © Copyright 2002 JC Robinson

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Posted: Friday, 29 November, 2002 @ 07:01 PM

Wow! Such a moving picture, and such a moving poem. I AM IMPRESSED!

Posted: Saturday, 30 November, 2002 @ 01:01 AM

Awwww.. 6.6 Piccy SO SAAAD!! huggles!!!! I loce you JC!!!! LOTS!!

Posted: Tuesday, 10 December, 2002 @ 02:27 PM

You're not alone! I love you! :O!! BAY-BEE!!!! Oh, cool pic though, such emotion, so SAD!! ^.~

Posted: Monday, 16 December, 2002 @ 07:40 AM

Waah! So sad! Did you dye your hair or did you just put it like that?

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