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Daisy Hunt

Heartbroken Alister
Heartbroken Alister by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

I really love how I did the hair here. I think it's much better than on my first attempt at realistic hair for Alister. And I wanted him to look completely haunted and if he is about to break down and cry any moment. I think I captured that. The eyes don't have pupils because they're supposed to look blank and dead.

It's based on a scene from the RP with Aubrie. Alister snapped when Valon and Tazi were being attacked by some nasty intruders that want Alister to help them, and he attacked them viciously. He felt numb when it was over and the people had left. He's terribly afraid that Valon and Raphael will be used against him and killed.

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Posted: Thursday, 01 December, 2005 @ 12:06 PM

Wow, that really did come out awesome!! The texture in the hair really makes it realistic and the tuff and the bangs are laying down a bit more, which looks better in my opinion. And the lower legs look as though there are wrinkles in the clothes. ^^ In the lower back of the torso, it almost looks a little too thick for Alister's stick figure, though I dunno if anyone will pay much attention to that. Somewhere towards the end, I'd probably recommend drawing the edge of the bed or something and some blankets underneath.

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