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Ashley Mock

Slumped Over
Slumped Over by @equiyosh (Ashley Mock)

I drew this yoshi as if he's seriously depressed about something. I think I might have done a better job on the arms though. I haven't thought up a name for him either. Artwork © Copyright 2002 Equinox Yoshi

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Rough / Concept
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22y219d ago
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Posted: Saturday, 30 March, 2002 @ 02:18 PM

His arm will look better if you curl the finger slightly. If you relax your arms "yes I mean Your arms!" now have alook at your fingers? they curl don't they? To hold them straight you are stretching and that is not a relaxed position, that is all that is really wrong with them. I'm sorry if the wording seems a bit strong but I'm a bit, just a bit sozzled "drunk!". its ok I'm adult and I don't get this way often, I've just had to part with my dog and my son boughht this bottle over and we drank it between us. He's depressed about it too!

Posted: Sunday, 31 March, 2002 @ 07:06 PM

i like them colored like that. you should name him clint or something. hmmmm... bye chick

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