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Miss Invoker

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Girl relaxing on bench on a spring day done with color pencil.

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20y209d ago
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Posted: Sunday, 18 April, 2004 @ 01:21 AM

wow, this is good. i like the way you unforgivingly displayed her stomach slightly spilling out of her tight jeans. very human.

Posted: Sunday, 18 April, 2004 @ 02:12 AM

Thank you for your comment. I to draw what I see and what I see isn't always perfect. smiles

Posted: Sunday, 18 April, 2004 @ 03:12 AM
Hi : ) I like your artwork, the colouring of the jeans and the shirt is really good. However, her face bothers me a bit, it looks weird. If you try to trace a line along her mouth, nose and the point where hair begins and another line across her eyes, you will see they make a funny angle. Another thing, the stitch line on the back of her shirt doesnt fit the folds. If the shirt has those heavy folds, the stichs cant make a straight line but need an interruption. I hope you don't mind my commenting, it is meant to be contructive and ofc it doesnt mean that my stuff doesnt need a lot of criticism as well ;)
Posted: Sunday, 18 April, 2004 @ 03:26 PM

Thanks for the comment , Its understandable that you noticed things like that ... I have been drawing since I was young girl and never learned any conventional methods of drawing so you might notice things being off a bit here or there... I either start with and image in my head and just start drawing or I see something I like and try to recreate it the best I can.

Thnks Again

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