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Rhayvenn Compton

The Pain of Loneliness
The Pain of Loneliness by @EmoVampiress (Rhayvenn Compton)

I was reading Vol. 1 of The Demon Ororon when i came across this scene. (Im going to be very vauge with the description) Kuro (the boy in the picture) had just lost his good friend(a cat). And they had just burried him in their backyard. I almost made me cry, actually i think i did. I actually just did this today so it's a bit messy. I was in a hurry. I used a #2 pencil like always...

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Posted: Monday, 01 November, 2004 @ 08:59 PM

whoa... this pic is really good. love the amount of emotion used in it. great job! :)

Posted: Monday, 01 November, 2004 @ 10:15 PM

Oh thanx! I was really trying to bring out his hurt. I've had the experience of losing someone close, so it was a bit easier to do. Thanx again :D

Posted: Wednesday, 03 November, 2004 @ 03:02 AM

This is amazing. The emotion in the face is very well rendered.

But, I think that the bottom of the image actually takes away from teh feeling, Without the wording, you can still see the hurt in the character, and the words are a little redundent.

Don't be afraid to let parts of it stand on its own. It's well done.

Posted: Wednesday, 03 November, 2004 @ 05:40 PM

Oh hey thanx!

Yeah i will admit that I am afriad to have things stand alone. I always feel that there should be something else with it. XP

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