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Afiag Noir

Haku and the cherry blossoms
Haku and the cherry blossoms by @Vampire_D (Afiag Noir)

It's a really crappy CG I did in like 30 minutes. It's of my character Haku (see bio) laying in the cherryblossom petal bed created by his ojiisan that he sleeps every night. His eyes didn't turn out right (or excuse me, eye).

pwease comment, pwease ;c

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Posted: Thursday, 12 February, 2004 @ 10:37 PM

Aw...I really do like this picture. The softness and almost lineartless of it all makes the picture very intriguing. I also like his enoumous amount of hair stretching out from him-it's not too often you get guys with very long hair like that n_n If I could critique anything (which I've never been good at anyways, pheh), I would ponder that perhapse next time make his waist just a tad wider. However, you have it down that the male's hips don't quite meet their shoulders-something that took me quite a while to grasp. Anyways, a very sweet and adorable picture of your dear character there. Much luck on future projects! -Raz

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