I really like the features of the face--espeically the eyes and lips. However, in comparison to the eyes and lips, the nose seems rather blunt. For future works, would you consider sharpening the nose shadows a bit more, so they're as "focused" as the rest of the face?
Something about the bust seems odd to me, too. Her chest goes
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Right now, and human ribcages are actually slightly angled, like this:
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Right now, her bust is just ...growing out of her chest. And it looks strange, not even right with the corset on.
Speaking of the corset, I totally love the colors and designs you've got going here. You're really talented with this digital painting stuff, and I'm excited to see more images from you! My comments are just things to keep in mind the next time you do stuff.
This looks like it took a loooong time.
I love the softness of the surfaces and the warm colours. The eyes are a good subtle shade and the detail in the hair is lovely. Great piece of work.
-K-