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Larissa Mau

Slience
Slience by @larimau (Larissa Mau)

My first piece of art in a long, long time. Got inspired playing BL games. (I decided that I like my BL/yaoi upfront.) Vallewida's my favourite character in Enzai. The original pic is actually larger and shows the not-so-safe-for-viewing-lower-half. (If you've played Enzai/any BL game, you would know what that means . . . ^^;;)

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Teen (VO)
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19y330d ago
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Posted: Sunday, 08 August, 2004 @ 02:26 AM

Two pieces of criticism...maybe try to make the hair look more fluid and make the hands a bit bigger to fit the proportions. (positive crit. keep in mind!) Anyways, great job on the background and chains...You also did a very good job on the shading and folds in his shirt. I can't do profiles at all, so I'm jealous of artists like you who do them very well, but it's great for you and you deserve the compliments on it!!

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