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Jennifer Dobyns

Amongst Blossoms and Feathers
Amongst Blossoms and Feathers by @Dim_Labyrinth (Jennifer Dobyns)

This is an OC for my Yu Yu Hakusho fanfic. The daughter of Jin and Rose, and grandaughter of Kurama and Ema. Her name is Aira, and I think she's pretty. i love her eyes. Pretty... ^^

Aira and art is (C) to DimLabyrinth

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Posted: Thursday, 30 October, 2003 @ 03:32 PM

Ink again, eh? Very, very lovely. I'm very impressed with your shading, it's quite lovely, especially on her obi. The entire design on the kimono is great, from the hem to the top. The pose is very traditional Japanese, it seems great for this character.

What I really love in this image is the green eyes--they're so pretty, but hard to notice unless you look at them because the black ink has a bit of a greenish tint--which works for this image. I don't really have any critique to give but to use a ruler to make the lines on the screen straighter next time--they're a little too wavy, whereas that is okay since it's background, it is a little distracting. Keep up the great work... and I LOVE the feathers.

Posted: Thursday, 30 October, 2003 @ 06:07 PM

Really like the greenish tint. Green ink, or just a photoshop manipulation? Very nicely done, in either case.

Posted: Friday, 31 October, 2003 @ 01:20 PM

Nice! Your use of shadowing really works here. I also like the dress/kimono she's wearing. Interesting design! Keep up the good work! ^_^

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