Hm. The abstractness caused by the shadows gives it a neat effect, but detracts from the anatomical beauty that drips from your other pictures. However, I am awed by the featherwork you did here. The background is also very, very wonderful. Love the sunset! The cracks on the beak look summat precarious because of the solidity of the lines used on them, but it gives the critter a much more natural feel to it, unlike the usually flawless beaks of the birdies I tend to draw. Especially since the beak is so curved and narrow at the tip. Hats off to ye!
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Hm. The abstractness caused by the shadows gives it a neat effect, but detracts from the anatomical beauty that drips from your other pictures. However, I am awed by the featherwork you did here. The background is also very, very wonderful. Love the sunset! The cracks on the beak look summat precarious because of the solidity of the lines used on them, but it gives the critter a much more natural feel to it, unlike the usually flawless beaks of the birdies I tend to draw. Especially since the beak is so curved and narrow at the tip. Hats off to ye!