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Schism
Schism by @kategod (Kate God)

I know the pieces fit cuz I watched them fall away mildewed and smoldering, fundamental differing, pure intention juxtaposed will set two lovers souls in motion disintegrating as it goes testing our communication the light that fueled our fire then has burned a hole between us so we cannot see to reach an end crippling our communication.

I know the pieces fit cuz I watched them tumble down no fault, none to blame it doesn't mean I don't desire to point the finger, blame the other, watch the temple topple over. To bring the pieces back together, rediscover communication.

The poetry that comes from the squaring off between, And the circling is worth it. Finding beauty in the dissonance.

There was a time that the pieces fit, but I watched them fall away. Mildewed and smoldering, strangled by our coveting I've done the the math enough to know the dangers of a second guessing Doomed to crumble unless we grow, and strengthen our communication

cold silence has a tendency to atrophy any sense of compassion

between supposed lovers between supposed brothers.

And I know the pieces fit.

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Posted: Friday, 28 September, 2001 @ 01:37 PM

I like this pic. I really dont know how to put why I like it. I guess Im a sucker for abstract and unique looking pics. Very nicely done. The pic has a lot of eye movement. What throws me off is the rating for it. I dont see the nudity. There really isnt any detail to make it so. I still like it though. If you could, could you mail me some more info on the pic. I looked at your other works too. You seem to have a knack for real media. Keep up the great work! ^.^

~~Ginsu!

Posted: Monday, 20 January, 2003 @ 12:21 PM

Ginsu i think its cause the things sticken its tail in itself... ouch... very cool pic though good job

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