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Janna Fong

I'm not dead, I swear!
I'm not dead, I swear! by @jfong (Janna Fong)

It's been a little over a month since I've posted here. I've been busy with school related stuff. =P Anyway, I had time to draw and color this. =D I'm quite fond of it for some reason. =Þ Enjoy!

Drawn in Painter Colored in Photoshop

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Posted: Wednesday, 06 October, 2004 @ 04:23 PM

Wow, what wonderful shading! The expressions are lovely, too! =D I like the green-haired boy best. ^.^

Posted: Thursday, 07 October, 2004 @ 12:35 AM

Really glad to see ya back XD. This is really good. They don't seem too stiff, the proportions are great, and the expressions and shading are wonderful. I really like the detail in the eyes, and in the hair, and how on the left side of the pic, the wrinkles where he has his hand on the shoulder. only thing i would say is to add a little bit of wrinkles with the other hand, i would say, maybe above it, because it seems from the wrinkles in the middle that that hand is kind of pulling on the shirt. I really like the arches in that one guys eyebrows. they are done great. really good job, nice one to come back on. XD

Sincerely, Ikaika

Posted: Thursday, 07 October, 2004 @ 01:34 PM

It'll take a lot more than schoolwork to kill you. :) Glad to see you're still around.

You've improved on drawing wrinkles--very nice. The lighting in this piece is pretty good, though it doesn't quite seem to fit in iwth the background (that SO looks like Carnegie library...) I'm envious of your ability to draw more than one person at a time... ::sigh:: I need to work on that! Anyways, keep on giving us pics whenever you have time! Good luck!

Posted: Sunday, 10 October, 2004 @ 10:58 AM

Ooh yeah! You've definitely improved from the other pic I just commented on. I'm not complaining about the shading and perspective things now. In fact, I won't be complaining about anything. It's great, and that's all!

I'd ask you for an art trade, but I'm not sure how busy I'll be with school, so I better not. Especially since I don't know if you'd like to do one, either. Er, babble.

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