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Ron Brands

NOOOO!!!!
NOOOO!!!! by @Mental (Ron Brands)

This is an unwritten part of my story... My main character sees this when he travels to the future... (scanner = #%@&^#)

Category:
Humanoid
Rating:
Mature (V)
Class:
Finished Work
Submitted:
21y83d ago
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Posted: Friday, 05 September, 2003 @ 11:29 PM
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It's pretty good. But... did he get shot in the back of the head? because if he did, he shouldn't have just a little dot of blood. His whole head should be caved in on one side.

Posted: Sunday, 07 September, 2003 @ 02:29 PM
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I appreciate the comment, however I like the 'subtle drip of blood' hint of him being shot in the head more than the 'brains all over the place' hint...

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