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Lauren Rankin

Vanilla Dreams
Vanilla Dreams by @Claidis (Lauren Rankin)

Did this for the March art competition at VCL. I won, heh. Not really much of a big thing though, they have one every month. I had this idea in my head for a while though, before hand. The scenery was a pain, and I think I killed my green marker with all those trees!

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20y16d ago
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Posted: Saturday, 24 April, 2004 @ 07:51 PM

So peaceful. Nice work on the proportions, clothes, and angle of her left leg, though that knee seems to be a little high compared to the other. The background is nicely drawn, and it's quite well shaded, especially with the way you can make out the shape of her arm under her hair. Good job.

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