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Devon Thompson

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Posted: Sunday, 12 September, 2004 @ 02:00 PM

The freshmaker! Love the expression. His left shoulder's a little lumpy, but it's great otherwise. I'd like to see some silly scene in the background like in the Mentos commercials, but it's funny as it is. Nice work.

Posted: Monday, 13 September, 2004 @ 05:44 PM

Heh, I can't believe anyone would actually like this thing. XD And yeah, I might go back and add a funny background later, it's just begging for one.

Thanks alot for the comment!

Posted: Monday, 13 September, 2004 @ 05:22 PM

Nice, the whole mentos thing is lost on me though, we've got polo mints and silvermints, but anyway, the picture's really cool, the expression's great especially the "twitch".

Posted: Monday, 13 September, 2004 @ 05:41 PM

Well, Mentos pretty much just has really stupid commercials that people love to hate, and they always end with someone holding up a pack of Mentos with a big smile on their face. =b

But anyway, thanks for the comment! I'm almost done with Chloe's b-day gift, so I'll be starting on your fursona fairly soon.

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