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Rennie Masaki

Fukkatsu/Moon Horse
Fukkatsu/Moon Horse by @mayonaka (Rennie Masaki)

This is my first GOOD attempt at drawing horses. Lately, I've been totally obsessed with SPIRIT. I own the movie AND the soundtrack....I'm SUCH an obsessie!^_^ Would anyone be kind enough to help me to draw SPIRIT style? Please e-mail me! Artwork © Copyright 2003 Rennie Masaki

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Posted: Tuesday, 07 January, 2003 @ 06:57 PM

Very good! Couple things to help you next time though..... -Where the forelock comes over the eye....it's supposed to go OVER the eye not under it..heh... And the back legs look a little big also, they don't need to be skinny but look long and elegant normally. Just some future tips^^ Otherwise it looks good. It's ok to be obsessed! I'm obsessed with Spirit too! ^^ I have drawn him once, it came out pretty good but I couldnt really share any tips with ya as good as someone else could so I'll leave it up to them.

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