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Ryn S.

 A gift for Katie
A gift for Katie by @koibito (Ryn S.)

This, ---yes, opencanvas--- picture is for my little sister. I knw it's kinda..um... odd and pink, but she's 8. So she liked it.

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21y13d ago
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Posted: Saturday, 15 November, 2003 @ 11:28 PM

That's so cute--very happy. I think she needs song lyrics on the side to fill up that space, something nice and happy. I like the soft background, and the way you colored her dress makes it look just like watercolor markers! I love her expression--it's happy but peaceful and makes me feel safe. :) I definetly like this--and it's really nice you drew something for your sister!

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