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Kitxen, Screwed Up
Kitxen, Screwed Up by @moonstar (Moonlight Star)

I'm gonna CG this, but it'll look alot better when I do! The ink's all smudged, but I'll clean it up. ^^;; But anywyas, same pic, nothing new... I might re-scan it just to give the cleaned up version, then I'll colour it. It'll be pretty! ^_^;;

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Posted: Saturday, 16 August, 2003 @ 11:24 PM

Ink looks pretty good to me... messy inking is not noticable except by the guy/chick who's coloring it. I'd know. Avoid coloring pics that have only been penciled. Overall- Like the tail, position and posture are good. The hair's alright, and the shoes need some work.

Posted: Sunday, 17 August, 2003 @ 01:02 PM

Heh, yeah, I'm bad at shoes, but I'm getting better! ^^;; You should've seen the shoes I drew in the past... I have a bad style in shoes. >.> I need to fix the hair.

Oh well, tankies! ^_^

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