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Gina Starwell

Rikku_Tiara
Rikku_Tiara by @Shelpup (Gina Starwell)

This is my friend's (Beanie_baby_neo) luppess Rikku_tiara. She is also the daughter of my own Kionno (and tends to resemble him greatly) and Beaneh's Plucky.--She's a tomboy so i tried to make her look more built then i normally draw females.--I hope you like it Beans >^_^< Artwork © Copyright 2003 Gina Starwell

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Posted: Thursday, 03 April, 2003 @ 06:15 AM
Bean: AWW! It's totally cyute!! -glomps- I'm lost for words, wow, it's awesome! -dies-

Rikku: -prods the picture- tis me? -blinks- .......I look purty!

Posted: Thursday, 03 April, 2003 @ 04:56 PM

This is a cool pic yep. Just a few crits... the neck is a bit too long and human looking for a lupe, along w/ the shoulers there. I like the angle, you pulled it off well. The tail is way too thick and it kinda looks like a tree.. >.o I really like the face, but unfortuanatly, it doesn't look like a girl at all. That might also have to do w/ the fact that she looks so bulky. Females are usually a little more slim... and it would do better if you added something to her eye, like lashes or something. Other than that, tis a great pic. I likes. ^^; But I would work on the necks, making them not so long and less human looking... just kinda looks weird... but yeah. I liek the lighting effects too, yep. nods

Posted: Thursday, 03 April, 2003 @ 10:00 PM

This is a cool pic yep. Just a few crits... the neck is a bit too long and human looking for a lupe, along w/ the shoulers there. I like the angle, you pulled it off well. The tail is way too thick and it kinda looks like a tree.. >.o I really like the face, but unfortuanatly, it doesn't look like a girl at all. That might also have to do w/ the fact that she looks so bulky. Females are usually a little more slim... and it would do better if you added something to her eye, like lashes or something. Other than that, tis a great pic. I likes. ^^; But I would work on the necks, making them not so long and less human looking... just kinda looks weird... but yeah. I liek the lighting effects too, yep. nods

Julie your my favorate critic :-D-I havn't talked to you in awile, where ya been?---Well as you can tell, I did have a little trouble with the neck/shoulder area, but part of the reason i made the position like that was b/c i know i need to work on it (You can prob realte to what I'm talking bout)--She has lashes ++points++ but they kinda blend with her bangs...all I can say is everyone has their own style and i'm trying to develop mine. Its great to hear from you, drop me a neomail when you have some time

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