This is very beautiful. It's cool to see the idea of fire for a Leo, and I really like the faery's design. The red leaves are really awesome, but her wings are what really grab me. The design on them is truly amazing.
I think her face is very well rendered, but the rest of her body doesn't seem quite as well done. It seems small for her head, and the anatomy just seems a little wonky. Keep practicing anatomy and you'll really improve, and your drawings will look much better for it!
My other critique is that there should be a little more contrast in this image. It's lovely and red, but it's also a little blurry when it comes to lines simply because there is so much red. Making some areas darker would help alleviate this.
Good luck on the rest of the Zodiac. This is a very cool idea and I hope the rest of your drawings are this pretty!
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What kind of comments is morna seeking for this piece?
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Please keep in mind, critiques may highlight both positive and negative aspects of this work, but the main goal is to constructively help the artist to improve in their skills and execution. Be kind, considerate, and polite.
This is very beautiful. It's cool to see the idea of fire for a Leo, and I really like the faery's design. The red leaves are really awesome, but her wings are what really grab me. The design on them is truly amazing.
I think her face is very well rendered, but the rest of her body doesn't seem quite as well done. It seems small for her head, and the anatomy just seems a little wonky. Keep practicing anatomy and you'll really improve, and your drawings will look much better for it!
My other critique is that there should be a little more contrast in this image. It's lovely and red, but it's also a little blurry when it comes to lines simply because there is so much red. Making some areas darker would help alleviate this.
Good luck on the rest of the Zodiac. This is a very cool idea and I hope the rest of your drawings are this pretty!