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Rapto
Rapto by @tpyne (T Pyne)

Just a really rough Raptor pic that I doodled

© T.Pyne 2003

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Posted: Monday, 01 December, 2003 @ 01:41 PM

Pretty good. However the forearms are too long, and the backlegs stiff. Raptors were quick moving preditors, which requires a lot of good muscling, and flexibility. The body says to me more iguanadon or some other herbavore... Somethign that might help with the arm/leg porportions is skeletal studies. Here's a pic... http://www.gppsd.ab.ca/~wirwin/science/sci20/paleo/raptor.jpg I also suggest looking at Kyoht's art. She used to have some animations of raptors... not sure if they're still up, but might give you some ideas. http://www.kyoht.com/

Posted: Monday, 01 December, 2003 @ 01:53 PM

Thanks :)

Im flattered especailly as it was a drawing right out of my head. I haven't even looked at a raptor picture in over a year :)

Even the later raptors (like Trex) had to move quickly

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