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Aliron Sketch page (oekaki)
Aliron Sketch page (oekaki) by @susafram (Susan Frame)

A recent sketch of Aliron Carpathia, a character i had made when i was in ninth grade... An albino and something of a "special assignment agent" (not assasin or mercenary or soldier.. hard to explain ><) She usually has some body armor and stuff, but nope. just good ol' vinyl suit-ness here... (its just an oekaki sketch, nothing grand <>) She ends up being Soren's daughter in the story-line i've got goin' on... And i'm being very vauge with that, so i didn't give any thing of "the story" away at all. Very lengthy explanation. But yeah, I'm wokring on my comic again, and its coming along pretty smoothly! I figured that with rulers and note paper, I'm good to go. WHo needs comic education?!?! I DON"T. .. think i do... but heck, it'll be an accomplishment either way! any suggestions on her outfit would be GREAT since i'm re-vamping her a bit!! Let me know your ideas!!! Artwork © Copyright 2002 Susan Frame

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Posted: Friday, 07 June, 2002 @ 09:22 PM

Swoot! A comic book herione that looks cool and doesn't have size EEE breasts...... X.x Good job on the character, she looks really neat.

Posted: Thursday, 04 July, 2002 @ 04:40 AM

This is awesome, Susan! Her anatomy is beautiful!!!! Gorgeous job, it looks amazing!!!

Posted: Saturday, 27 July, 2002 @ 01:30 PM

Awewome work, Susan.

Posted: Wednesday, 11 December, 2002 @ 04:55 PM

This is reakin awsome. Rock on. Hmm, suggestions you say? Well, maybe some body-suit armor around her breast and mabye like a headset since she is an agent or something, ne? Well thats just my lowly opinion. Good job by the way.

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