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Lonely Skies
Lonely Skies by @jfong (Janna Fong)

A commissioned piece for a Megatokyo fanfiction. I was asked to draw a forlorn Takami looking up at the sky. I like her expression. It turned out much better than I expected. =)

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Fan Art - Other
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Posted: Tuesday, 04 March, 2008 @ 11:55 AM
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Very pretty, great detail with the folds on her dress. A little tip: putting a background showing the sky, to show the point, but just an idea tip. Great work on it! ^_^

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