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Cara Kennedy

Asylum Girl
Asylum Girl by @grim-reaper-kumquat (Cara Kennedy)

This is possibly one of my favorite pieces. This is Erin, the daughter of one of my D and D chars, Vespera, or Star. She's part of a race my friend made, and if i could tell you the details i would. But please, still enjoy this piece!

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Posted: Wednesday, 23 June, 2010 @ 05:57 PM
Rating: 3

This is great! I like the sketchy quality of it; makes it look very dynamic.

I love the pose. A lot of the detail gets lost, though, there's so much of it concentrated in one area. Took me a few minutes of looking to find her face. Varying the line weight to emphasise the form could really help sort some of it out, or even better: colour! I'd love to see this coloured.

Posted: Wednesday, 23 June, 2010 @ 06:10 PM

[quote="Anrui"]This is great! I like the sketchy quality of it; makes it look very dynamic.

I love the pose. A lot of the detail gets lost, though, there's so much of it concentrated in one area. Took me a few minutes of looking to find her face. Varying the line weight to emphasise the form could really help sort some of it out, or even better: colour! I'd love to see this coloured.[/quote]

I actually did finish this right after this doodle, buthave yet to scan it.itwas madeintoprints for a con.

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