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COUGH Now here's an extreme anomaly... It all started with a glimpse of a wedding gown with wings.. then it was one of my subtle 'forbidden love' again between angels and demons - reflected by the wings and the colour contrast..

The groom was SUPPOSED to be Gary, simply modelling for a thematic shoot, but due to my poor skills, Gary's face is somewhat deformed. lol

Meh, tis overall an 'interesting' picture. I will never do something this bright again, i hope LOL. Happy Loving.

Edit: Picture is re-uploaded because subtle corrections on the right wing was made.

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Posted: Saturday, 21 January, 2006 @ 03:01 PM

We all just have to love that theme. Black and white always look great together, but I love the pink and red in there too. It makes for a great contrast in the two characters. All the white effects on the lavender make for such a soft and beautiful piece. Also, it creates a peaceful mood. Anyways, great (not to mention beautiful) work!

Posted: Saturday, 21 January, 2006 @ 05:42 PM

Thankyou so much for your kind comment! I really missed it lol It's a great encouragement in all aspects.

Thanks!

Posted: Sunday, 22 January, 2006 @ 07:24 PM

This picture is really good. i love how you did the wings. i've never seen wings done this way . it's very interesting.

Posted: Sunday, 22 January, 2006 @ 11:02 PM

Thanks so much! I'm really happy that you like this picture lol. Thanks for pointing something out that seems to be more original! lol I wouldn't have thought so if you didn't point it out lol. Cheers.

Posted: Friday, 10 February, 2006 @ 09:53 PM

This picture has such a lovely, dreamy quality to it that I've loved since seeing the thumnail (I'm just lazy and haven't commented in awhile. >_> )

The only critique I really have is her veil - it seems very "harsh" on an otherwise soft character. It sort of seems like a net more than a fine veil. Which is cool if that's part of some storyline (his mother's veil, perhaps), but it is vaguely out of place on her. ;)

I'd love to see more pictures of them!

Posted: Saturday, 11 February, 2006 @ 02:42 PM

waii Thanks so much! ^^

Thanks for the crit! Now that u've mentioned it, it really stands out! lol Maybe it would've looked better if i had pink lines and even lighter lines lol

Actually i did make it seem a bit more 'hard' than 'soft' because i thought veils were supposed to be somewhat hard? - obviously i have absolutely no idea about this lol But yea, u're absolutely right about it being out of place lol - will be careful next time ^^

Thanks so much!

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