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Jessica Patterson

"If I'm Gone When You Wake Up...Please Don't Cry.." by @dreamaria (Jessica Patterson)

Ee..I was listening to this song on Napster I had downloaded years ago, and this idea came to me. Dreamaria doesn't know it..but Dené's going to be executed the next morning..she's temporarly sad because she knows he's leaving..just not for good..

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Posted: Friday, 10 May, 2002 @ 07:34 PM

Nooo! You can't kill Dené!! Or if you do ... I wanna read that bit o' story!!

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