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Aya and Yuuhi
Aya and Yuuhi by @hotamaxw (Hotaru Maxwell)

I drew this in the morning, something looks wrong, but i can't find it. Can anyone help me?

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Fan Art - Anime/Manga
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Posted: Wednesday, 03 April, 2002 @ 07:58 PM
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Just my 2 cents. I think his hand might be a bit too long and the perspective on his forarm that is wrapped around her waist looks off. Just trying to help =) Nic pic.

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