@Lucky_Ladybug66
Daisy Hunt
Oh, these poor bikers. o.o They got chased by assassins, their car fell in a ravine, Raphael was badly hurt and poisoned, and Alister and Valon got into a fight because of their conflicting ways of dealing with the situation. Valon actually wound up punching Alister. Now he feels bad and wants to say he's sorry.
I know it doesn't look like Valon's sitting on the log. XD; Maybe he's crouched down in front of it or maybe he's about to sit on it. ^^; And I don't how well I got Raphael's position or Alister's trenchcoat, which he's laying on. Maybe there's a slight hill under him or something?
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giggles. Oh dear, those hills can be such troublesome things. XD
Well, the thingie in the corner was part of the ravine, but it looks good as a tree, too. ^^ Probably better as a tree... muses.
Hmmm... Yes... It would look better if part of Raphael's right hand was showing....
Don't worry about multiple replies; for me, the site's been non-existent...I was getting worried o.o;
I think you can get away with the hill excuse for this one...I just hope it's not a very steep hill, else Raphael might roll away... "Raphael will be okay, won't he?...wait, where's he going? Gah!"
Maybe Varon's...backed up against the log?...or maybe, because of the hill, he's sliding off? XD At any rate, I like the poses in this one, and the overall composition is nice...I think Raphael's crossed arm might be a little too flat, but rounding the cuff of his sleeve up a little more, or maybe showing part of his hand would fix that right up.
I like Amelda especially in this...I think it's his pose...it looks very...natural? And the tree in the upper-left corner (I'm assuming it's a tree^^;;) adds a nice amount of depth.