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Cristina Marsi

Fence
Fence by @malvasia (Cristina Marsi)

Not much to say... its okish, guess should find a way to add some light.

Updated: added shadows and highlights. Old image is still in archive (or at least it should be, if I just manage to find out how to see archive)

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Posted: Thursday, 09 September, 2004 @ 10:52 AM

This is very amazing. It's rare to see someone on here that does realistic landscape-type art... I really do enjoy it, though. I really love the detail you've put into the plants, and the trees (me? I'd probably just scribble green and call it plants!) The house is very well drawn, the perspective in this entire image is great! I love the mountains most of all. The way they seem to be kissing the sky is beautiful...

And I can't imagine where you got the patience for that fence. It's great! Your image has such great composition--I feel like I could be there, walking along beside that fence.

Highlights are key, indeed. It's the only thing missing from this picture! I can't quite tell what medium you used, but I think that maybe white pastel might work? I'm not sure.

Good luck, though!

Posted: Friday, 10 September, 2004 @ 12:58 AM

Thanks for stopping by and commenting. You got the point on whats missing on this picture, highlighs! I really need to go back and add some white :) The used medium is soft pastels.

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