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Neithird slashing - Mar/03
Neithird slashing - Mar/03 by @catguypaladin (Bryan Costello)

it's kind of a crappy pose. I wanted to show how powerful her claws were.

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Posted: Saturday, 26 April, 2003 @ 10:41 PM
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Not bad, but it looks like Nei isn't putting much effort into the swing. If she's slicing through that girder, make her look like her body is putting more motion into the slash.

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