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Wind
Wind by @ChaosTheory (Goldberry Took)

I've noticed something: The substantial lackage of Male elementals. So, here is the first lineart in the series, Wind. The concept was to be that he's carrying the sun (the cloth) across the sky. It will come across better in the colored verison, I hope.

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Posted: Tuesday, 06 April, 2004 @ 11:02 AM

Hehehe. Notice the note at the end...I HOPE! Hehehe. :oP But you know...I'm sure it will look great! Yay! Cause Hannah's an awesome artist! And she can draw guys REALLY well (unlike me, who seems to draw a constant show of almost completely female figures...x.x). So come back and keep looking here to see more of Hannah's wonderful drawings! (including her earth, wich I've seen and looks absolutely wonderful) Hehe. Look at me! See! I came and commented, and love the place. WHY DON'T YOU HAVE OTHER VISITORS! YOU SHOULD! :oP Hannah deserves comments people! COMMENT! That's and ORDER! x.x Have a great easter! (with lot's of chocolate...hehehe)

Oh, it seems I havn't really said much about the pic itself...so...here it goes. Love his wings, nice job on his face and expression, the sun in the cloth is understandable but when I first looked at it I had no idea what it was (my mom to, who just came up over my shoulder and asked outright what it was), but it makes plenty of sence after you know what it is. Once this is colored I'm sure it will be beutiful and the sun will be much more recognizable. :oP Keep up the great work Hannahperson! (whoo hoo, long comment)

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