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Laurel

unfinished - cardboard coloring
unfinished - cardboard coloring by @magenta (Laurel)

I really wanted to color on cardboard in the car trip to florida (a lovely 21 hours), and so I did this on the back of a cereal box. There's actually a lot more to this image.. I just need to finish her hair. That is.. if you can see her. I showed this to some people at school and some just couldn't see it. My friend was trying to convince me that there were 2 ears and 2 eyes in the picture. I just couldn't see it. Ah well, whatever you see is fine. :)

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20y181d ago
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Posted: Thursday, 13 May, 2004 @ 03:09 AM

@_@.... it's hard to spot her at first but i found her and it makes the picture a lot prettier if you can see her. i can't pic out any mistakes xept her hand dos look a little strange, the one right in front of her face but not much and her ear seems just a bit small but it's a really interesting pic, can't wait to see it finished

Posted: Thursday, 13 May, 2004 @ 10:18 PM

thanks! As for the critiques.. thanks, but I think she's actually pretty fine. For the hand.. it is smaller as it is supposed to be somewhat in perspective. Oh, I've known people with very small ears.. I think it suits her fine. But thanks for you input! :D

Posted: Wednesday, 16 June, 2004 @ 02:10 PM

Okay, I swear I won't comment on everything >_>

This is really, really cool though. I love how tranquil it is, even through the busy color and shapes.

You've got an excellent sense of balance, and color. I'd love to see something like this done in paint of some sort. Youd do killer murals :D

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