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Danielle Sullivan

Alice
Alice by @brokenever (Danielle Sullivan)

"She paused and looked at Adam in the midst of biting a piece of what she was quite certain was fruit. It was about the size of an apple, and blue. It was very sweet, and juicy, and crisp; it was delicious, even if it did look a little strange, and lumpy."

"As the darkness deepened and the stars began to shine in the twilight she began to search the sky for familiar constellations, finding none, and not expecting to, but enjoying the view all the same."

2007 birthday present.

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Posted: Sunday, 11 September, 2011 @ 11:33 AM
Rating: 3

Nice, I particulary like the window in the background.

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