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THE PAIN! Chapter 1 Image.
THE PAIN! Chapter 1 Image. by @Pheep (Alexandra Smith)

(Uploaded a second time after fixing a bit with MS's wing) Hey all n_n This is going to be the title image for the first chapter of a webcomic that my friend Allie (alliecuno) and myself have been planning - 'The Pain'. The purpose of the comic will be to mock those annoying, overly angsty (or overly perfect) characters that seem to be taking over RP and fanfiction these days. The three people in the picture are The Pain's three main characters. The blue haired girl is Lost, the protagonist; trenchcoat boy is An'gizutsu Kiatsu-Ren (called Angzt XP); and the third girl is Mary Sue - full name Mary Sue Perfexia Alessandri Ikari Nazallia Van Cherique. ^_^ Hopefully we'll have gotten this off the ground by the time I'm back at school.

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Posted: Thursday, 23 December, 2004 @ 06:17 PM

As I've said before: This is the best idea evar. Mary Sue makes me grin especially. You oughta have OC: That girl who's suspiciously like... you!

Also I love the alternating caps... hee.

Lost is cute. I hate to say it. But she is. She's just adorable.

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