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Stephanie Hirt

Veranda Scene
Veranda Scene by @Salome (Stephanie Hirt)

Doodle done last week to get rid of exam stress. Doodling is serenity. :D

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20y172d ago
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Posted: Friday, 11 June, 2004 @ 08:42 PM

Compositionally, this is really nice...it reminds me of a scene in a nice storytelling movie. Lovely job with the doodley flowers, too. :3

Posted: Sunday, 13 June, 2004 @ 12:35 PM
Love this : D

The style in which you sketched it is very free...happy almost, which helps develop the ambience a lot. I love the hatching in contrast to the little squiggles you used to represent hair, plants, and the wrinkes in cloth.

Excellent use of expression too.

Brilliant ^^

Posted: Monday, 21 June, 2004 @ 12:14 PM

Amazing work on the composition of the background and characters! The background looks great; I especially love the hatching work for the shading. It'd be nice if the character had a little more depth to match the background, but I understand that this is just a doodle ^^ (And a darn good doodle, at that :P)

Posted: Friday, 16 July, 2004 @ 06:57 PM

Very nice picture ...great job and good luck on all your next art stuff O_x Warky Wark¿?¿?

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