@Minzoku
Julie Miyamoto

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Posted: Monday, 27 December, 2010 @ 08:54 AM
Rating: 5

That's a very odd virus, but the idea is intriging that you have something that tells you when you hit the halfway mark.

Posted: Monday, 27 December, 2010 @ 07:41 PM

Thanks for the comment =D

Posted: Tuesday, 28 December, 2010 @ 05:12 PM
Rating: 3

As cover art goes, this is interesting but not necesarily very eye-catching. I'd put a little more emphasis on the forehead circle, and maybe save the long blurb for the back cover. Unless this is the back cover; in which case, it's an excellent design.

Meanwhile, the story concept sounds brilliant and really ocmpelling, and I can see about a million directions you can go with it. I'mma go read it now...

Posted: Tuesday, 28 December, 2010 @ 08:47 PM

Thanks for the comment =D

I updated the link to the story, incidentally. Forgot that the chapter listing collapses after a month.

Posted: Wednesday, 29 December, 2010 @ 04:05 PM

I found it okay; thanks. ^^;

This pic inspired me to do an oekaki, incidentally.... (sorry it sucks ^^;;; )

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