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Kaleigh Bulford

Wolf Entrance - Realistic Meteor
Wolf Entrance - Realistic Meteor by @Outlaw (Kaleigh Bulford)

This is a graphic I'm going to base my next website design on. That ugly tundra like part is going to have text over it so its all good XD Please critique the wolf, not the bg which I spent only a couple minutes on.

So here is Meteor in 2004, quite an improvement, no?

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Posted: Thursday, 23 December, 2004 @ 04:39 PM

The wolf is beautiful, but so is the rest of the image. The fur is incredibly detailed and breath taking.

Posted: Thursday, 23 December, 2004 @ 06:06 PM

Great job on the craftsmanship here; the fur and nose and eyes are excellently done. Pat on the back for that.

Next time, though, really really check your initial sketch before you go into the details. There are some errors on the head that could have been easily solved by checking the sketch (or painting in its early stages) in a mirror.

If you flip the head around, you'll realize that the left ear is far lower than the right. and that there's too much far side of the face showing for the angle you have the muzzle at. It's stuff that just takes practice and patience with the intial sketch, not something that's easily corrected by this end.

However, you've done such a great job with little details like the fur, I'm sure that now you know these new techniques, you'll use 'em really well. Keep up the great work! It's a lovely piece.

Posted: Thursday, 23 December, 2004 @ 06:56 PM

Fantastic! You worked the fur like a pro...have any advise on how to do the fur realisticly..... Shirley

Posted: Friday, 24 December, 2004 @ 03:42 AM

...Wow. That fur is just, way too realistic xD HOW did you do that?? I really like the fur on his face and ruff of his neck. You made it flow very nicely; not too straight and not too curly. Just perfect! And those eyes are simply stunning, especially the blue-ish one. You did a very nice job on this :3!

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