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Zerbrochen das Bild
Zerbrochen das Bild by @akivpapa (Akiva Papa)

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Zerbrochen das Bild
Zerbröckelt die Farben
Kleine Schlacken
Stücke aus deiner Haut
Ich sammle sie auf
und zünde sie an
Ich gebe sie dem Feuer preis
und der Schwärze des Lichts

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