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Ein kleiner brauner Fleck
Ein kleiner brauner Fleck by @akivpapa (Akiva Papa)

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Ein kleiner brauner Fleck
Ein Spritzer aus geronnenem Blut
Du bist klein geworden, mein Liebster
Wo sind deine schillernden Farben?

Ich brauche mich nicht zu erinnern
Es erinnert mich
Mein Nicht

Er erinnert mich an dich
Ich schaue ihn an mit Freude

Artwork © Copyright 2002 Akiva Papa

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Posted: Saturday, 22 June, 2002 @ 07:37 AM
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wie kommst du eigentlich darauf das die leutchen das hier verstehen? naja...

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