Very neat. The porportioning is a lil off in the hair to face, face placement, and body with the perpective. But the colorin is nice and so is the concept, which are jut as important as the porporting. I think maybe yer tyles are clashin ::shrugs::

YGO is very close to Zim's but you wanna put somehting of yer own in it too, I guess. It's still a very nice pic. It kinda depends on what you may be usin. I find Manga scans on the net and study thoes to help remeber rules like for their bangs, the (your) left hand side comes down to their eyebrow and then goes at a 45 degree angelish from there and ends somewhere past the jaw line or close to it. On the other side it goes to the eyebrow or lower and hits a more 90 degree angle. I'm not puttin ya down, but it's tough to pick out little things like that. It takes lots of time. I have no room to speak either, I'm already applyin my own style to it.

So..nice and I'll be sendin my side very soon. n.n

WAAAAHH!!! Poor Yami!! ;_; What's going on with him?